Scene Feedback from my Story Grid Mentor
This is a great (tough) exercise! I love the voice and banter that comes through so clearly from the beginning. You certainly write tension well, and it's so cool to see the way you and Kallista both break down story structure.
Thank you! I'm definitely still learning to put words to what I have only passively known up to this point.
It's such a valuable part of the writing process. I always find I surprise myself by just how much I know/have learned, but haven't put words to.
So excited to keep reading your insights!
This is a great (tough) exercise! I love the voice and banter that comes through so clearly from the beginning. You certainly write tension well, and it's so cool to see the way you and Kallista both break down story structure.
Thank you! I'm definitely still learning to put words to what I have only passively known up to this point.
It's such a valuable part of the writing process. I always find I surprise myself by just how much I know/have learned, but haven't put words to.
So excited to keep reading your insights!